Hello,
I posted a previous topic asking how to do an aircheck. Someone gave me some advice and I am now working on the aircheck. I am trying to apply for a radio news anchor position and I have to send an aircheck and writing samples. I have written the scripts that I will be sending to the program director and also will be using for my aircheck. However, it has been almost three years since I took a radio newswriting class in college and I can't remember exactly all of the rules and such. We were never required to have a textbook for that class, so I have nothing as a reference. Could somebody look at my scripts below and edit them for me? I know that they are probably really pretty bad right now, but again I have not written one in years. (I actually got an A in the class and was really good at writing radio news script, but that was when I knew exactly how to write one!!) I would really appreciate it. Thanks
TWENTY U.S. SOLDIERS WERE KILLED TODAY IN THE DEADLIEST DAY FOR U.S. FORCES IN TWO YEARS. THIRTEEN SOLDIERS WERE KILLED IN A HELICOPTER CRASH AND SEVEN WERE KILLED BY MILITIA FIGHTERS AND ROADSIDE BOMBS. TODAY’S DEATH TOLL IS THE THIRD HIGHEST OF ANY SINGLE DAY SINCE THE WAR BEGAN.
A FLORENCE MAN IS IN CUSTODY AFTER A GUN DUEL WITH HIS FATHER. POLICE SAY TWENTY ONE YEAR OLD ERIC MAYO SHOT HIS FATHER, FORTY SIX YEAR OLD MIKE MCCANN IN THE ABDOMEN AND RIGHT THIGH. THE FATHER AND SON SQUARED OFF WITH HANDGUNS AFTER AN ARGUMENT ABOUT THE FATHER DATING A YOUNGER WOMAN. MIKE MCCANN WAS AIRLIFTED TO UNIVERSITY HOSPITAL WHERE HIS CONDITION IS UNKNOWN.
MARVIN GENTRY SCORED A CAREER-HIGH THIRTY TWO POINTS AS CINCINNATI BEAT WEST VIRGINIA IN OVERTIME NINETY SIX TO EIGHTY THREE AT FIFTH THIRD BANK ARENA. THE WIN SNAPS A FIVE GAME LOSING STREAK FOR THE BEARCATS.
SNOW IS ON ITS’ WAY TO THE TRISTATE THIS EVENING. METEOROLOGIST TIM HANSON SAYS SNOW WILL START AROUND 7 O’CLOCK TWO. TO THREE INCHES OF ACCUMULATION IS EXPECTED. SNOW WILL TAPER OFF AFTER MIDNIGHT. TOMORROW, PARTLY CLOUDY WITH A HIGH OF 35 DEGREES. IT’S SUNNY AND THIRTY TWO DEGREES RIGHT NOW.
I posted a previous topic asking how to do an aircheck. Someone gave me some advice and I am now working on the aircheck. I am trying to apply for a radio news anchor position and I have to send an aircheck and writing samples. I have written the scripts that I will be sending to the program director and also will be using for my aircheck. However, it has been almost three years since I took a radio newswriting class in college and I can't remember exactly all of the rules and such. We were never required to have a textbook for that class, so I have nothing as a reference. Could somebody look at my scripts below and edit them for me? I know that they are probably really pretty bad right now, but again I have not written one in years. (I actually got an A in the class and was really good at writing radio news script, but that was when I knew exactly how to write one!!) I would really appreciate it. Thanks
TWENTY U.S. SOLDIERS WERE KILLED TODAY IN THE DEADLIEST DAY FOR U.S. FORCES IN TWO YEARS. THIRTEEN SOLDIERS WERE KILLED IN A HELICOPTER CRASH AND SEVEN WERE KILLED BY MILITIA FIGHTERS AND ROADSIDE BOMBS. TODAY’S DEATH TOLL IS THE THIRD HIGHEST OF ANY SINGLE DAY SINCE THE WAR BEGAN.
A FLORENCE MAN IS IN CUSTODY AFTER A GUN DUEL WITH HIS FATHER. POLICE SAY TWENTY ONE YEAR OLD ERIC MAYO SHOT HIS FATHER, FORTY SIX YEAR OLD MIKE MCCANN IN THE ABDOMEN AND RIGHT THIGH. THE FATHER AND SON SQUARED OFF WITH HANDGUNS AFTER AN ARGUMENT ABOUT THE FATHER DATING A YOUNGER WOMAN. MIKE MCCANN WAS AIRLIFTED TO UNIVERSITY HOSPITAL WHERE HIS CONDITION IS UNKNOWN.
MARVIN GENTRY SCORED A CAREER-HIGH THIRTY TWO POINTS AS CINCINNATI BEAT WEST VIRGINIA IN OVERTIME NINETY SIX TO EIGHTY THREE AT FIFTH THIRD BANK ARENA. THE WIN SNAPS A FIVE GAME LOSING STREAK FOR THE BEARCATS.
SNOW IS ON ITS’ WAY TO THE TRISTATE THIS EVENING. METEOROLOGIST TIM HANSON SAYS SNOW WILL START AROUND 7 O’CLOCK TWO. TO THREE INCHES OF ACCUMULATION IS EXPECTED. SNOW WILL TAPER OFF AFTER MIDNIGHT. TOMORROW, PARTLY CLOUDY WITH A HIGH OF 35 DEGREES. IT’S SUNNY AND THIRTY TWO DEGREES RIGHT NOW.